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Wednesday, 13 November 2019

my descriptive writing

hi bloggers today i'm going to show you my description writing. here is my work

There is a cheerful birthday boy having an amazing birthday.
The wobbly jelly is lying pretty still.
There are tasty doughnuts on a shiny plate.
There is a scrumptious cake that is really big.
There are delicious fairy bread sandwiches on a big plate.


There is some wobbly jelly on a large plate. 
There is a strong smell of egg.
There is some lime and strawberry doughnuts.
There is a smell of delicious icing on the cake.
There is a smell of the beautiful flowers .
There is a  smell of the beautiful breeze.
 There is a big pile of almonds and nuts.
There is a beautiful smell of perfume.
There is a smell of the sizzling sausages.
There is a stinky smell of some egg sandwiches.

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