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Monday, 24 May 2021

my animal non-chronological report

 Hi bloggers,

Today I am writing about my animal non-chronological report. In a non-chronological report you have to write in third person which means you have to write in factual language. I was writing my report



about cheetahs . Non-chronological reports are really fun and maybe you should try doing one. In my non-chronological report, I had to write what it eats ,where it lives and even what it looks like. I also wrote about predators. Here is what my non chronological is like:


Start up

Cheetahs come from Africa where there are lots of different animals.

Cheetahs only live in a certain spots of Africa. Cheetahs also have to look after their cubs and protect them.

Cheetah cubs also look like a honey badger so no animals attack them.


What they look like.

Cheetahs are sort of yellow with black dots all over them.

Cheetah cubs look different from the adult cheetahs.

Cheetah cubs have a white stripe and a black stripe on them it makes them look like honey badgers.

Also male and female cheetahs look the same. Cheetahs also have four legs.

Cheetahs are cat-like animals that

are a lot bigger.



Animals that attack it  

Lions are cheetah predators because they attack cheetahs and their cubs. Cheetahs try running around

as fast as they can to get the lions away when the lion sees the cheetah running. The lion starts to try

and chase the cheetah. The lion gets too tired and gives up so the cheetah goes back to what it is doing.

Hyenas are also a predators because they attack cheetahs and their cubs so the cheetah attacks back.



Where they live

Cheetahs live in the African Savanna and they like lying down under shady trees. They like to hide in tall

grass to wait for prey to come nearby and attacks.


What they eat

Cheetahs eat meat and they drink water. They like springbok, steenbok, dunkers, impala and gazelle.

Cheetahs like to rest lots because when they run they won't run far so they lay down in the shade.

Cheetahs also have black stripes by their eyes which helps there eyesight. Cheetahs can see things

that are really far away and can even see through the the really hot sun. 


Cheetahs are meat eaters, carnivores. They are really fast and have good eyesight. There predators

are lions and hyenas. So cheetahs are very cool animals and it is really cool to see and hear on

what they can do.



3 comments:

  1. Kia ora Sam,
    Thank you for sharing your writing with us. In order for us to fully appreciate your fabulous writing, we need to be able to read it all. At the moment a lot of it goes off the side of the blog. Let me know when you have fixed this. What was challenging as you learnt about non-chronological reports? Why was it a challenge?
    I look forward to your reply.
    Mrs Taylor :)

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  2. Hi Mrs Taylor. i'm sorry about what happened to the post. what happened was when I was doing the post it wasn't sticking out to the side like that. I hope now that it is better because It has been edited. Also what was hard about it was that was challenging was that at first I hardly knew what it was but after a while I figured out what to do on one.
    From Sam:(

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    1. Hi Sam,
      It's great that you have now fixed it. It looks amazing, well done.
      Mrs Taylor :)

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